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Post by silverphantom on Feb 7, 2020 8:48:07 GMT -8
Trainer Profile Character Name: Aquila Andersen Nickname: Aquila Gender: Male Age: 28 Trainer Class: Band Member (Quandrangular Head Singer) Height: 6’ 7” Weight: 170 lbs Hair Color & Style: Aquila has long grey hair, dyed that color because he liked the way it looked. He wears his hair either in a braid or a ponytail, to keep it out of his face. Eyes: He has large, round green eyes, and wears comically-big gold glasses on his face because he can’t see shit without them. Clothing/Accessories: Aquila wears ripped blue jeans, which are the style apparently, and t-shirts of his band. The designs vary: some of the shirts have their band logo on it, which is a 2-D representation of a 4-Dimensional shape. Some of them have the band members' stylized faces on it. Others are of their band mascot, Pippi the Parrot on it. He wears their merchandise because they get it for free, and it's good stuff. He also wears long khaki pants in the winter to keep the cold out. In the winter he also wears sweaters to keep warm. He has a necklace from his mother, it’s kind of girly, but he doesn’t care. It’s a gold heart with diamonds around the heart. He keeps it safe as its his only connection with his mother that he has left. He has black gauges in his ears, and stud piercings on the helix of his ear. He also has several tattoos all over his body. One is a Hydreigon stretching the length of his back; another is an Arbok coiling up his arm. Then, there is a name and date over his heart - Jackie Andersen, 02- 16-186 - his mother’s name and the day she died. General Appearance:Aquila is a tall, skinny dude. He is six feet and seven inches tall, but only weighs one hundred and seventy pounds. He wears comfortable clothes - he isn't a fashion guru at all. He usually wears t-shirts or sweaters depending on the weather, and pretty much always wears blue jeans and/or khakis. He has dyed grey hair; it's long and luscious, and he usually either braids it, or puts it into a ponytail. He isn't one for jewelry much aside from his gauges in his ears. However, his mother left him a family heirloom before she died, and he keeps the golden heart necklace around his neck at all times. He constantly checks to make sure it's still there. It has diamonds around the outside of the heart, and thieves would love to get their hands on it, but Aquila would never let someone take it from him willingly. He also has several tattoos, professionally done by one of his friends he made as a band lead singer. He has a hydreigon on his back, and an arbok on his arm, and then he also has the date of his mother's death tattooed over his heart. He is a confident sort of human being, though he is a bit air-headed. Being a lead band singer has given him a lot of confidence, especially because their songs have been really popular and he's been given a lot of positive feedback. But despite being confident, he isn't an asshole who thinks himself above others. Hometown: Tiensee Town, South Godai Personality:History: |
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Post by silverphantom on Feb 7, 2020 8:48:36 GMT -8
Inventory Dians:  5,798 Items:x9 Great Ball x7 Super Potion x1 Full Heal x1 Paralyze Heal x1 Antidote x2 Revive x1 Sitrus Berry x1 Super Repel x2 Green Apricorns Subway Ticket from Kroy to Sangproctor City x1 Subway Ticket from Kroy to Union x1 Subway Ticket from Union to Kroy x1 Subway Ticket To Anywhere x1 x1 Ampharosite x1 Rare Candy x1 Uncommon Roll of Choice Key Items: PokéDex  Journal  Holocaster Trainer Advancement Advancement Points: 150 Tier: 0 - Maternal Instincts: 1/20 AP - Ooh, Shiny!: 10/30 AP - Silver Tongue: 5/15 AP - Gift Giving: 1/20 AP Tier: 1 - Seeing the Sights: 1/15 AP - TLC: 12/25 AP - To Be the Best 4/15 AP Tier: 2 - Making Friends: 0/20 AP - Nursing: 1/20 AP Pokemon Total EXP Gained: 294 | Pokemon |
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 Alastair the SealeoCaught at Level 5
Nickname: Alastair
Gender: Male
Type: Ice/Water
Ability: Thick Fat
Height: 2’ 7”
Weight: 87.1 lbs
Health: Intermediate
EXP Rate: Medium Slow
EXP Gauge: (300/312)
EXP Gained: 294
Level: 32
Division: D7
Total Stats: 384
- Attack: 83
- Defense: 83
- Sp. Attack: 82
- Sp. Defense: 82
- Speed:54 (14%)
Vitamins Used: None | Moveset:
1. Defense Curl
1. Growl
1. Powder Snow
1. Water Gun
5. Rollout
9. Encore
13. Ice Ball
17. Brine
21. Aurora Beam
26. Body Slam
31. Rest
31. Snore
32. Swagger
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Post by silverphantom on Feb 7, 2020 8:53:21 GMT -8
Journal Orion D’Aramitz +294 exp, +150 AP, x9 Great Ball x7 Super Potion x1 Full Heal x1 Paralyze Heal x1 Antidote x2 Revive x1 Sitrus Berry x1 Super Repel x2 Green Apricorns Subway Ticket from Kroy to Sangproctor City x1 Subway Ticket from Kroy to Union x1 Subway Ticket from Union to Kroy x1 Subway Ticket To Anywhere x1 x1 Ampharosite x1 Rare Candy x1 Uncommon Roll of Choice -Item Finder App -PokeWav App |
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Post by selenity on Feb 15, 2020 17:53:59 GMT -8
Alright, Silver, you know the drill so I'm just going to jump right into it. Firstly, Trainer class while we do allow themed custom ones. As you've written this one it's a no. Please rename it or select something different.
General appearance, Hair colour and style, eyes, and clothing/Accessories all need more added to it. This is a good skeleton now you just need to flesh it out. Revise these then I'll be back for round 2.
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Post by silverphantom on Feb 20, 2020 6:33:27 GMT -8
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Post by Revelation on Feb 20, 2020 18:33:18 GMT -8
Okay Silver, review time. I'm just going to jump in to the basic stuff now, and then tackle the big issue at the end.
For the appearance section, this is alright. All I would ask is for some more detail. What do his glasses look like, and what color? What are some of the band shirt designs, and what kind of sweaters? Just some additions like that would be good.
Also, being 6'7" and only 150 pounds is possible, but it is incredibly unlikely that this is a healthy weight, especially if weight has been lost from drug use. I would recommend bumping this up a bit to at minimum about 170 or clarifying that this is, indeed, not actually healthy.
For personality, please put this in paragraph form instead of a list.
Okay, and for history, I'm going to go ahead and tackle the big issue here: the drug use. On Godai, more sensitive topics are indeed allowed as long as they are properly marked and meet Proboards Terms of Service. However, we also want to make sure that we do not cross into unpleasant territory with certain sensitive topics. As such, characters who use recreational drugs must meet several requirements.
Without even touching on the fact that Gloom could not aid in the creation of drugs, the big issue here is that drug use is serious. It has profound impacts on lives. As such, drug use for the sake of drug use on the site is not permitted. If you want to RP with drug addiction, it would at the very minimum need to be labeled clearly, and it would need to be clear without a shadow of a doubt that this is having a bad thing with severe consequences. Conversely, going into too much depth on the effects of addiction and withdrawal would be too graphic for this site. It is a tightrope walk at best.
Honestly, after reading through this history, a question does come up. What is your goal with this character? If the answer is that you want to RP a singer who just travels and partakes in illegal substances, then I will tell you now that Godai is not the place for that and the character will not be accepted. And even if that is not the case, I would highly suggest switching to something else. If you are adamant on trying to make this work, then DM staff and we will discuss if there is a chance of it being accepted. Just know that there are no guarantees.
That should do it for now. Let us know when updates are made and we will review it again.
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