Orion D'Aramitz Update

[silverphantom]

I am requesting a modification for my character, Orion D'Aramitz.



Link: godairegion.proboards.com/thread/832/orion-daramitz
Link to Thread: godairegion.proboards.com/thread/942/serene-selene?page=1&scrollTo=3591

Type: Update

Requesting: Adding AP, EXP, and Dians from last couple Evaluations

Changes:

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{Changes}

Inventory

Dians: 7,644



Items:

x2 Super Potion

x1 Full Heal

x1 Antidote

x2 Revive

x1 Sitrus Berry

x1 Super Repel

Green Apricorns

Subway Ticket from Kroy to Sangproctor City x1

Subway Ticket from Kroy to Union x1

Subway Ticket from Union to Kroy x1

Subway Ticket To Anywhere x1

x1 Ampharosite

x1 Rare Candy

x1 Uncommon Roll of Choice



Key Items:

PokéDex

Journal

Holocaster

Berry Pot

Sprayduck

• Town Map
• Item Finder App
• PokeWav App

Trainer Advancement

Advancement Points: 196



Tier: 0



- Maternal Instincts: 1/20 AP

- Ooh, Shiny! 10/30

- Silver Tongue 5/15

- Gift Giving 1/20




Tier: 1


- Seeing the Sights: 11/15 AP

- TLC: 12/25 AP

- To Be the Best: 13/15 AP

- Dedication: 5/10



Tier: 2



- Making Friends: 5/20 AP

- Nursing: 14/20 AP.

Pokemon

Total EXP Gained: 327

Pokemon
Selene Caught at Level 5 Nickname: Selene Gender: Female Type: Poison/Fire Ability: Corrosion Health: Intermediate EXP Rate: Medium Fast EXP Gauge: (334/336) EXP Gained: 327 Level: 31 Division: D5 Total Stats: 434 Attack: 65 Defense: 65 Sp. Attack: 126 (29%) Sp. Defense: 65 Speed: 113 (26%) Vitamins Used: None	Moveset: 1. Scratch 1. Poison Gas 5. Smog 10. Ember 18. Sweet Scent 13. Dragon Rage 15. Poison Fang 21. Double Slap 24. Flame Burst 25. Nasty Plot 29. Toxic 29. Fire lash 29. Captivate 29. Disable 29. Swagger 30. Incinerate Unique Moves: - - - - Item:

Pokemon
Amenadielle the Absol Caught at Level 39 Nickname: Amenadielle Gender: Female Type: Dark Ability: Pressure Health: Intermediate EXP Rate: Medium Fast EXP Gauge: (322/336) EXP Gained: 0 Level: 39 Division: D5 Total Stats: 546 Attack: 185 (34%) Defense: 100 Sp. Attack: 60 Sp. Defense: 101 Speed: 100 Vitamins Used: None	Moveset: 1. Feint 1. Scratch 4. Leer 9. Quick Attack 10. Pursuit 13. Taunt 16. Bite 19. Double Team 22. Slash 25. Swords Dance 29. Night Slash 33. Detect 37. Psycho Cut Unique Moves: - (egg move) Mean Look - - - Item:

Please put journal in third post.

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{Journal}

Journal

Orion D'Aramitz: x9 Great Ball, x7 Super Potion, x1 Full Heal, x1 Paralyze Heal, x1 Antidote. x2 Revive, x1 Sitrus Berry, x1 Super Repel, x2 Green Apricorns, +1 Subway Ticket from Kroy to Sangproctor City, x1 Subway Ticket from Kroy to Union x1, Subway Ticket from Union to Kroy x1, Subway Ticket To Anywhere, x1 Ampharosite, x1 Rare Candy, Town Map, Item Finder App, PokeWav App, +150 AP, +294 EXP, 5,798

A Not-So Serene Selene : - 1 Super Potion; +21 AP; +21 EXP; + 2,014

Under Pressure: -4 Super Potions; +26 AP, +12 EXP, + 682; + 1 Star Piece

Berry Good - 850, + Berry Pot, + Watering Can (Psyduck); - 6 great balls, - 5 pokeballs, -1 star piece

Code:

[spoiler]{Changes}[div align="center"][font size="3"][i][b]Inventory[/b][/i][/font][/div]



Dians: 7,644



Items:

[img style="max-width:100%;" src="https://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/a/a3/Bag_Super_Potion_Sprite.png" alt=" "]x2 Super Potion

[img alt=" " style="max-width:100%;" src="https://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/2/29/Bag_Full_Heal_Sprite.png"]x1 Full Heal

[img alt=" " style="max-width:100%;" src="https://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/e/ea/Bag_Antidote_Sprite.png"]x1 Antidote

[img style="max-width:100%;" src="https://www.serebii.net/itemdex/sprites/revive.png" alt=" "]x2 Revive

[img src="https://www.serebii.net/itemdex/sprites/sitrusberry.png" style="max-width:100%;" alt=" "]x1 Sitrus Berry

[img alt=" " style="max-width:100%;" src="https://www.serebii.net/itemdex/sprites/superrepel.png"]x1 Super Repel

[img alt=" " style="max-width:100%;" src="https://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/0/01/Bag_Green_Apricorn_Sprite.png"] Green Apricorns

Subway Ticket from Kroy to Sangproctor City x1

Subway Ticket from Kroy to Union x1

Subway Ticket from Union to Kroy x1

Subway Ticket To Anywhere x1

[img alt=" " style="max-width:100%;" src="https://www.serebii.net/itemdex/sprites/ampharosite.png"]x1 Ampharosite

[img alt=" " style="max-width:100%;" src="https://www.serebii.net/itemdex/sprites/rarecandy.png"]x1 Rare Candy

x1 Uncommon Roll of Choice



Key Items:

[img src="http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-An_FTtpjfCc/TgPW1g_QNMI/AAAAAAAAAyQ/XqemkqFR3BY/s1600/PokedexIV.png" style="max-width:100%;" alt=" "] PokéDex

[img style="max-width:100%;" src="https://cdn.bulbagarden.net/upload/8/8d/Bag_Journal_Sprite.png" alt=" "] Journal

[img alt=" " src="https://www.serebii.net/itemdex/sprites/holocaster.png" style="max-width:100%;"] Holocaster

[img alt=" " src="https://www.serebii.net/itemdex/sprites/berrypots.png" style="max-width:100%;"] Berry Pot

[img src="https://www.serebii.net/itemdex/sprites/sprayduck.png" style="max-width:100%;" alt=" "] Sprayduck


[ul type="disc"]
[li]Town Map[/li]
[li]Item Finder App[/li]
[li]PokeWav App[/li]
[/ul]

[div align="center"][font size="3"][b][i]Trainer Advancement[/i][/b][/font][/div]



Advancement Points: 196



Tier: 0



- Maternal Instincts: 1/20 AP

- Ooh, Shiny! 10/30

- Silver Tongue 5/15

- Gift Giving 1/20




Tier: 1


- Seeing the Sights: 11/15 AP

- TLC: 12/25 AP

- To Be the Best: 13/15 AP

- Dedication: 5/10



Tier: 2



- Making Friends: 5/20 AP

- Nursing: 14/20 AP.

[div align="center"][font size="3"][b][i]Pokemon[/i][/b][/font][/div]


Total EXP Gained: 327

[div align="center"][table style="width:100%;"][tbody][tr][th style="border:1px solid #000;" colspan="2;"]Pokemon[/th][/tr][tr][td][div align="center"][img src="https://www.pkparaiso.com/imagenes/sol-luna/sprites/animados-shiny/salazzle.gif" style="max-width:100%;"]

[b][u]Selene[/u][/b]

Caught at [b]Level 5[/b][/div]



[b]Nickname:[/b]
Selene
[b]Gender:[/b]
Female
[b]Type:[/b]
Poison/Fire
[b]Ability:[/b]
Corrosion
[b]Health:[/b]
Intermediate
[b]EXP Rate:[/b]
Medium Fast
[b]EXP Gauge:[/b] (334/336)
[b]EXP Gained:[/b] 327
[b]Level:[/b] 31
[b]Division:[/b] D5
[b]Total Stats:[/b] 434
[ul][li]Attack: 65
Defense: 65
Sp. Attack: 126 (29%)
Sp. Defense: 65
Speed: 113 (26%)
[/li][/ul]

[i]Vitamins Used:[/i] None[/td][td][b]Moveset:[/b]

1. Scratch
1. Poison Gas
[b]5. Smog[/b]
[b]10. Ember[/b]
18. Sweet Scent
13. Dragon Rage
[b]15. Poison Fang[/b]
21. Double Slap
[b]24. Flame Burst[/b]
25. Nasty Plot
29. Toxic
[b]29. Fire lash[/b]
29. Captivate
29. Disable
29. Swagger
[b]30. Incinerate[/b]



[b]Unique Moves:[/b]

-

-

-

-

[b]Item:[/b][/td][/tr][/tbody][/table][/div]

[div align="center"][table style="width:100%;"][tbody][tr][th colspan="2;" style="border:1px solid #000;"]Pokemon[/th][/tr][tr][td][div align="center"][img src="https://www.pkparaiso.com/imagenes/xy/sprites/animados/absol.gif" style="max-width:100%;"]

[b][u]Amenadielle the Absol[/u][/b]

Caught at [b]Level 39[/b][/div]



[b]Nickname:[/b]
Amenadielle
[b]Gender:[/b]
Female
[b]Type:[/b]
Dark
[b]Ability:[/b]
Pressure
[b]Health:[/b]
Intermediate
[b]EXP Rate:[/b]
Medium Fast
[b]EXP Gauge:[/b] (322/336)
[b]EXP Gained:[/b] 0
[b]Level:[/b] 39
[b]Division:[/b] D5
[b]Total Stats:[/b] 546
[ul][li]Attack: 185 (34%)
Defense: 100
Sp. Attack: 60
Sp. Defense: 101
Speed: 100
[/li][/ul]

[i]Vitamins Used:[/i] None[/td][td][b]Moveset:[/b]

1. Feint
1. Scratch
4. Leer
9. Quick Attack
[b]10. Pursuit[/b]
13. Taunt
[b]16. Bite[/b]
19. Double Team
22. Slash
25. Swords Dance
[b]29. Night Slash[/b]
33. Detect
37. Psycho Cut



[b]Unique Moves:[/b]

- (egg move) Mean Look

-

-

-

[b]Item:[/b][/td][/tr][/tbody][/table][/div][/spoiler]

Source: [b][i][div align="center"]Journal[/div][/i][/b]

[a href="https://www.tapatalk.com/groups/pokemon_godai/a-orion-hyacinth-d-39-aramitz-t1535.html"]Orion D'Aramitz[/a]:  x9 Great Ball
x7 Super Potion, x1 Full Heal, x1 Paralyze Heal, x1 Antidote. x2 Revive,  x1 Sitrus Berry, x1 Super Repel, x2 Green Apricorns, +1 Subway Ticket from Kroy to Sangproctor City, x1 Subway Ticket from Kroy to Union x1, Subway Ticket from Union to Kroy x1, Subway Ticket To Anywhere, x1 Ampharosite, x1 Rare Candy, Town Map, Item Finder App, PokeWav App, +150 AP, +294 EXP, *dian* 5,798

[a href="https://godairegion.proboards.com/thread/942/serene-selene?page=1&scrollTo=4035"]A Not-So Serene Selene[/a] : - 1 Super Potion; +21 AP; +21 EXP; + [img src="https://storage.proboards.com/6966007/images/yQTyOYCyRywPwMttrZGD.png" alt=" "] 2,014

[a href="https://godairegion.proboards.com/thread/1051/pressure?page=2&scrollTo=4136"]Under Pressure[/a]: +26 AP, +12 EXP, + *dian* 682; + 1 Star Piece

[a href="https://godairegion.proboards.com/thread/1091/berry-good"]Berry Good[/a] - [img class="smile" src="//storage.proboards.com/6966007/images/yQTyOYCyRywPwMttrZGD.png" style="max-width:100%;" alt="*dian*"] 850, + Berry Pot, + Watering Can (Psyduck); - 6 great balls, - 5 pokeballs, -1 star piece[/spoiler]



[Revelation]

Hey Silver! So sorry this took this long to get to. Before I can approve your modification, we need a few more things. First, we need a link to the evaluation in question. Second, we need you to create a "Journal" section for us to add, which will include both that link to the topic as well as listing out exactly what you gained from the evaluation. Feel free to look at other active characters to see what a journal typically looks like. If you have any questions, feel free to ask any of staff. Thanks!

[silverphantom]

Ok I think I fixed everything

[Bones]

Hey Silver! There seems to be a coding issue - at least in the preview. If you've updated the code and not the preview, please do! Otherwise, I have to base this look on what we see physically.

1) For your "Journal", I apologize for not catching this mistake earlier! But I just realized you reaped Orion from eons ago! As a result, you need to have proof of that reap in your "Journal". This means telling us what you took from Orion - just like the rewards you get from an Evaluated Thread. Feel free to follow how I did it for "Reaping Sonak's" entry in - Here!

2) In your "Inventory", there are some images that are quite gigantic compared to the 64x64px images that are provided. Please keep them uniform! You can find the tinier version of the images (i.e - Revive, Super Repel, etc) on Serebii. Please choose the tinier images like how you chose for the Pokeball. ALSO feel free to grab some related images from my profile/inventory if need be as well.

3) In your "Trainer Advancement" section, you state Dedication in both Tier 0 and Tier 1. Please take it out of Tier 0.

Everything looks great! Let me know when you've fixed those and naturally we can approve this! I'm so glad to see you getting stronger mons!

[silverphantom]

I don't see what the coding issue is, but everything else I fixed.

[silverphantom]

Hopefully that's everything!

[Revelation]

Hey Silver. Your modification is approved, but before I close this I want to check something. Are you sure you want the Journal as your third post? You have a fourth post originally saved for the journal. As long as that is the case though, your modification has been completed!

[silverphantom]

yeah I don't know why that is

[Revelation]

Well, it shall be left for now in case you want to do something with it. If not, you can request it to be deleted or cleared. This thread is now closed without further ado.