Jackson Baxter

[Woolcana]

Trainer Profile

Character Name: Jackson Baxter

Nickname: Black, Jax

Gender: Male

Age: 19

Trainer Class: Artist





Height: 6'0

Weight: 182 lbs

Hair Color & Style:

Deep umbra black ,spiky and combed to a Faux hawk Jackson's hair is a mess of spikes and a mess if uncombed, even after being tamed to their desired shape the hair tends to have a mind of its own, spikes going this or that way of their own volition. His hair usually stays around the same length taking good care to keep it trimmed neatly aside from his favorite style if it is brushed straight the hair would be almost down under his ears but due to the Faux hawk is neatly combed above his hair

Eyes: Almond-oval shaped orbs, bright and wide the eyes of Jackson are A shade of Sapphire blue often filled with thoughts and imagination. They are topped with thin black brows directly above the bright oval shape's it’s odd you will see these eyes focused on you but if you do odds are they will be full of curiosity or questions or perhaps devouring the scenery. 


Clothing/Accessories:

Normal everyday accessories include A black Skull and crossbones earring and plastic rimmed prescription glasses, Occasionally Adorned with a black Choker necklace Jax’s Clothing choice is usually dark colors, black’s and Gray’s accented with red and purple shades.



Most of his outfits are clothes suited for warm and hot weather short-sleeved shirts and tank tops with loose-fitting pants and shorts due to his living in one of Godai’s more hot regions he has few long-sleeved shirts and sweaters.



General Appearance: Having an average build and a casual stature the only thing that really stands out about Jackson may be the fact that he is a few inches tall for average, and his normal clothing choice of “Punk/Gothic”.



His Posture is one who was tutored by a fussy nanny at a young age that is to say he takes care to walk with pride and business-like in his stride an odd combination with his clothing choice.



His face is unblemished by acne or scars, missing any features such as facial hair as he never grew it during his teenage years most of his facial features are pointed and angular such as his chin and nose both ending in a sharp point.



Hometown: Weswell town, West Godai



Personality:

Jackson is a very strange mirror personality he strives to make friends but he always tries to keep the maximum distance he can manage between his friends and his true self.A difficult person to open up, but often it is very easy to open up to him because he is usually honest to a fault in regards to anyone besides himself because he feels people should know how he truly feels, this is not to say he is insensitive or blunt he does take peoples emotions into account but he will still state an opinion even if it offends someone.

His blunt manner could lead you to believe that he does not tend to care about others feelings but in reality he just has difficulty knowing the proper time subtlety is needed in a conversation oftentimes opting to remain silent if he is unsure how to speak you could say his head is in the cloud but its more likely he is in deep thought about his words before he speaks so as to specifically word the replies.

Jackson had a poor social upbringing leading to difficulty and quirks in his mannerisms during speech but you could say his ability to contemplate everything he says is A positive one.

He has a heavily introspective thought process born from relying mostly on himself and his own imagination for his entertainment and is very likely not paying attention to the things around him unless actively doing so with purpose.

History: Born to a Single Mother in Weswell Town Jax never had A father figure in his life as his mother was a bit too preoccupied raising him and working multiple jobs to keep as much money as she wanted to keep up her rather lavish living style ever since her parents had left her their business.They were living comfortably from the inheritance until he was born, but his father never met her after he had been born, quickly the money his family had saved up dried away and she had to downsize due to her excessive spending.

His primary education was spent in a private school paid for by his mother with the dwindling family accounts but by the standards of the expensive private school he went to Jackson was considered middle class at best and even though he tried his best to make friends he tried his best never to reveal too much of his life, taking care to avoid any discussion of his wealth and status.

The secondary school he went on to was normal schooling do to the funds that had been drained from his families account, Secondary school was about average for him, he enjoyed his passion for the arts, which was graphic design and 3D Modelling.  he managed to open himself up more in Secondary school gaining some friends and peers with similar interests.

After finishing secondary school it was a difficult time for Jax, he struggled to find work he was passionate about and his mother needed help with money so thinking it might be a good chance to seek new inspiration for his work as well as a good way too get out of his mothers home he left home instead of choosing to live in a dead-end job he chose to become a trainer, taking a partner in from a pokemon pound for abandoned or wild pokemon that have wandered into town with no trainer to care for them he found his new partner in an energetic young Rattata and left his hometown in the dust eager to strike out after inspiration and experience that an artist needed.

Inventory

Dians: 1,000







Items:



5x Pokéball







Key Items:



PokéDex



Journal



Holocaster

• Town Map

Trainer Advancement

Advancement Points: 0



Tier 0:

Pokemon

Total EXP Gained: 0

Pokemon
Isdan Rattata Caught at Level 5 Nickname: Lush Gender: Male Type: Dark/Normal Ability: Hustle Height:1’00 Weight:8.4 lbs Health: Weak EXP Rate: Medium Fast EXP Gauge: (7/9) EXP Gained: 7 Level: 5 Division: D9 Total Stats: Attack: 12 Defense: 10 Sp. Attack: 7 Sp. Defense: 3 Speed: 18 (%36) Vitamins Used: None	Moveset: 1. Tackle 2.Tail Whip 3.Quick Attack Unique Moves: - - - - Item:

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Journal

Adventure Log said:

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[Revelation]

Hey Woolcana! Welcome back to Godai! Always glad to see vets return to the site. Now, how about we just jump right in?

Okay, so after reading through, I will say the number one thing to work on right now is grammar. I would also love to see more detail in the descriptions of Jackson's personality, history, and even clothing choices, but those can be worked on once we get grammar all situated.

First of all, capitalized words should only be either at the beginning of a sentence or for a proper name, such as New York City, Sally, etc. So having Jackson is fine, but having a word like "casual" be capitalized in the middle of a sentence would not be.

Another thing is ending sentences. As Bones suggested, a good rule of thumb is to end a sentence when you either change ideas or when you need to stop for a deep breath. Commas work similarly as a short break, such as where you would just get a quick breath in the middle of something.

These are just very general rules, though. A great resource to use is grammarbook.com. They have a lot of articles explaining where to use punctuation in writing. I'd highly recommend checking that out! Feel free to also ask us anything about this, as we are more than happy to help. Once we get this sorted out, we can go a bit more in depth on Jackson as a character overall.


After that, looking at pokemon, there are two things I would suggest for that section. One is to list the total stats where requested. This helps us to keep track of what your overall stats are and make sure that everything adds up nice and clean. Another thing to note is that the number next to each move is supposed to be the level at which that move is learned. I would suggest looking at the PokeDex entry here on the site to help get those levels sorted out.

Alright! That's enough for now. I can't wait to look back on this once it is updated. Just post here again when you're ready!

[selenity]

So far, you have a nice outline. Before I jump into replying about the app, I'd like to request you to flesh out the general appearance, eyes, and hair colour and style.

[Woolcana]

I Have spent some time adjusting my grammar and working on sentence structure as well as formatting, adjusted a decent amount regarding his physical appearance and am hoping for some more feedback as to what to add im looking for some suggestions on what to put in

[Revelation]

Alright Wool! Glad to see you've worked on this. I will start off by saying that there's still a ways to go on sentence structure and such. One thing to suggest is trying to read your sentence out loud slowly. If you find yourself having to stop and take a breath in order to finish it, then it is too long and needs to be broken up. Also, I would highly recommend proofreading to remove redundant statements. For example, "spikes" and "mess" are mentioned numerous times in the description of his hairstyle. Cutting some of those out would help make the writing a bit more succinct and clear.

That's okay though! We can help with that in private messages. Besides, having good content is more important than knowing the ins and outs of English sentence structure. So, let's go ahead and dive into his story. 

So first of all, why do people open up to him? Normally, people who are honest to a fault end up actually repelling people due to the bluntness. I understand you mention that he just states his opinion, but we need to know more than just "He doesn't offend people." If people open up to him, its because there's something that actively draws something to them. \

Next, what quirks does he have? Don't just tell us he has them from a rough upbringing. Tell us what they are, how they really developed, and how they impact his interactions with others. Similarly, what does he contemplate? How much? Why? Does this cause him to be slow in response or take more time in general? Does he lose his train of thought? Give us more details here and really show these characteristics you're mentioning. 

For things to add on, what does he like? What does he dislike? Does he have hopes, dreams? How about fears? What motivates him? What is his weakness? Does he have any close friends, and how does he interact with them compared to those that are just acquaintances? This is just a couple of starting points for you. Let us have it with his personality! Don't hold back! The more the better, honestly. 

Now on to history. Similarly to the personality, it all comes down to giving details and expanding upon ideas. Why did the father leave? What impact did that have at each stage of Jackson's life? Why did his mother never learn to manage money better, especially when it started winding down? Why was Jackson afraid to be middle class at his school? Did he make any close friends? How? What were those relationships like? How did they shape Jackson? Did he have any defining moments in school? And what about outside of school? We have heard almost nothing about that, and that would be most of his life. Does he study? Is he outdoorsy or more of a bookworm? 

Alright, that's enough to get you going for round 2! As always, feel free to reach out with any questions!